All Comments on 'The Piano'

by ThatOneGirl24

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CruzinSuziCruzinSuziover 8 years ago
Brilliant

So wonderfully written. The time it must have taken you to compile the piano playing from her perspective and then his perspective. Then his scars, my mind wonders where that is going to lead.

But everything he wants to do, see, feel, smell, and taste. That is a mouth full of memories.

You have become my favorite literotica author. And I will be looking for you everywhere. I will try not to stalk you because you should not be bothered from your task.

Music, sex and food...my 3 favorite things.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Where was the story?

This was more like an opening paragraph. Piano teaching crazy person.

sultrluv2sultrluv2over 8 years ago
Artists will understand

Music and love making both art forms & nicely captured in this story

visioneervisioneerover 8 years ago

ThatOneGirl24,

You have written a very lovely story with vivid, sensual imagery. Looking forward to the continuation. Terrific job using the music to illustrate the D/s nature of their relationship.

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