by dr_mabeuse
Good premise.
But for my taste, at least, too much pain and not enough teasing/edging.
Four stars.
Great writing and I would sure like to see more of the week ahead as well as the interactions of these two. I can visualize our Andrew sitting at the piano in a white shirt and tie but regressed a bit in short pants and knee socks as Miss V patrols around him with a gleaming ebony hairbrush carrying the threat of yet another painful and thorough bare bottom trip across her lap. Oh man ....
Honestly doc, this is why you're the best. Every word of this was woven with erotic gold.
Just discovered the wonderful world of BDSM last night. I'm now trying to discover where I belong in this world.
I disagree I think this story is far hotter than your other self-indulgent male domination fantasies.
You should write more female dominated tales, its obvious you have a talent for it. Good work
While the male domination 'does it' for me more, this was incredibly hot. I'm beginning to think that anything you write is erotic.....
That has got to be one of the most erotic things I've ever read. The emotion, the dialogue; it was all so engaging and the sex was just as rousing as the buildup. I'm so glad I stumbled onto this. Thank you!