All Comments on 'The Pick Up'

Loved the way Jake took over....no violence, no threats, just strength of will....keep up with the stories!!

Never read one like it before.

I liked it. The story reminded me of the cuckolding part of the movie "The Getaway." I did like the first half (the build up) better than the second half, but it is always hard for these characters to figure out what they're going to do after you get them in motion. Thanks!

and she had no idea why?

what a piece of crap i just read, its a kind of a funny story rather than erotic