All Comments on 'The Pilgrimage Ch. 03'

I hope we won't have to wait that long for the next chapter as we had for this one :-)

Also you really should get a proof-reader to catch the words accidentally replaced with something of totally different meaning but similar sounding... e.g. the occurrence of 'discourse' instead of 'discord' in Morrigan's promise to Vanessa was really out-of-place to say the least. I know you said you have an editor but apparently she did not catch that, for example.

Also, there is one question bugging me for a while now with this story... what happened to the gods/goddesses of Earth who are not on the ship?

Can't wait for the next installment.

great story, great plot.. lots of twists and turns love it