All Comments on 'The Pilgrimage Ch. 05'

Please continue.

Did you get that great power line from spiderman.

love where this is all going, cant wait to read the future chapters... plz continue.... thanks

Thanks for the comments. Actually I've never seen Spiderman. The great power line is my version of "absolute power corrupts absolutely." I actually thought it was original.

Peter Parker learned that lesson after his uncle Ben was killed after he let the theft go by at,a wrestling event.

I made you a favorite author when you were writing Creations Guardian. I saw the reference to that story when you talked about "The Maker of All Things". I really love this story line and I look forward to the next chapter. Please don't wait 6 months to post it. I have no problem with reading long chapters,(8 to 20 pages) but If it means seeing chapters more often I would rather read two 4 page chapters then one 8 page chapter as it allows me to better remember the story line and not feel lost trying to remember what has happened in the past. I do look forward to reading the next chapter soon.