by mrsterygor
Why do you think it's creepy?
It is a voyeur/exhibitionist story.
The shock value is supposed to be there.
I have no issue with criticism regarding my writing.
Just be constructive with it.
That's all.
Expected some three way action. Oh well, it was good nonetheless .
I was thinking about including a three way in this chapter, but I couldn't
find a way to realistically have it happen.
Perhaps, I will include a three way in a future story.
Nevertheless, thank you for the feedback and constructive criticism.
Thank you for the feedback.
I appreciate it.