All Comments on 'The Pink Flowered Panties Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
wtf??

that was creepy...

mrsterygormrsterygoralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Response to creppy comment

Why do you think it's creepy?

It is a voyeur/exhibitionist story.

The shock value is supposed to be there.

I have no issue with criticism regarding my writing.

Just be constructive with it.

That's all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Expected more

Expected some three way action. Oh well, it was good nonetheless .

mrsterygormrsterygoralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Response to expected more comment

I was thinking about including a three way in this chapter, but I couldn't

find a way to realistically have it happen.

Perhaps, I will include a three way in a future story.

Nevertheless, thank you for the feedback and constructive criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Nice

That was fuckin hot

mrsterygormrsterygoralmost 9 years agoAuthor
Response to nice comment

Thank you for the feedback.

I appreciate it.

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