All Comments on 'The Pirate and the Elf Ch. 02'

Like how the power keeps shifting, but i am a sucker for seeing a bitch getting what she deserves in the end. Looking forward to next chapters

JC

said pretty close to what I was thinking.

Since we're inside her head as well as his, there are so many things that could happen that would be enjoyable for all parties involved, if they want it.

please come back and write more, would really love to see them finally have a full sex scene (especially if she finds herself enjoying it, maybe even moreso than sex with her own people).