All Comments on 'The Pirate King Ch. 07'

Keep up the great writing. LOVE LOVE this story..

This will never stop being the best story on this site, in my opinion. I seriously want this on my bookshelf-- or some version of it, at least. I don't know what people would think about the sex parts, but to be honest, I skim those. I'm sure they're amazing, but-- as strange as it is-- I'm not really on this site for sex. I'm on it for the great writing. And this, my friend, is great writing. I want to learn everything I can about these characters. I love the mystery of their pasts, their futures. I want them to stay together no matter what (three months is going to be a very, very long time, indeed) and I want them to be the sea and the sky and love each other FOREVER and this comment is getting long and weird so I'll stop, but you have to know that I will read however many more chapters you decide to write unconditionally, and, uh, no pressure. Bye!

and then come the three months. What a skip my heart does when I see you've posted another chapter. The thrill of it all....your writing, their emotions, the underlying truth of who and what and where....by chance my weekend was spent in a place called Pirates Cove, and it made my mini vacay all that much sweeter coming back to another chapter. Thank you for your dedication, and the swell of the waves upon this sea of romantic intensity.....when, oh when????can we expect more?

so descriptive and real like im on the deck gently swaying then rollicking in the waves with the lovemaking scenes. I agree that the fight was building up between these two. Not to see who would best each other but to weigh their own strength, dominance and pride against each other and know that they're a perfect match - light and darkness, sky and sea. Im just gaga for these two and story and now I have to wait.............love this line too

my world exploded. I had thought I was in darkness; what a falsehood. I had simply not had my eyes opened, my world expanded, to experience the sudden brightness, electricity, everything out of nothing.

Hearing this song, I imagined "Sailor" and "Captain" whispering it for eachother!

(«I Belong to You», by Lenny Kravitz)

You are the flame in my heart

You light my way in the dark

You are the ultimate star

You lift me from up above

Your unconditional love

Takes me to paradise

I belong to you

And you

You belong to me too

You make my life complete

You make me feel so sweet

You make me feel so divine

Your soul and mind are entwined

Before you I was blind

But since I've opened my eyes

And with you there's no disguise

So I could open up my mind

I always loved you from the start

But I could not figure out

That I had to do it everyday

So I put away the fight

Now I'm gonna live my life

Giving you the most in every way

I belong to you

And you

You belong to me too

You make my life complete

You make me feel so sweet

Okay write a book plz because I love this!!!!

If I could rate this higher than 5 stars, I'd give it 10. Not just this chapter, but all of this story. I'm as in love with this couple, as they are with one another. If you're not a published author, you should be.

I’m not sure how you don’t have the top ranked story on this site! I have been reading on this site and others like it for years and this is hands down my favorite! I think you could easily get published! I love this so much... I want to watch a movie about this but it wouldn’t be able to live up to what you have spun here. I adore ghost and the captain is amazing as well. Great writing just beautiful!

Also... some day it would be awesome to read a story that centers on Natch. He seems like he has stories of his own that need to be heard. Just sayin :)

this crew puts up with so much

Loved the counterattack! +5

Anonymous, you are funny:)

And nakamook - you are amazing as I’ve told you before I’m sure! Just doing a rereading and it’s still amazing

This is so delightful - so hot, so finely described. You go so far beyond the mere mechanics of erotic pleasure. And your men are so tender amidst the toughness. And on top of all that - the beautiful soul depth - thank you! So glad I still have so many more chapters to enjoy.