The Pirate King Ch. 18

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nakamook
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And he sang to me, there in the ropes where we existed half in his dreams and completely in mine. We lay there as I held the sky and listened to the song of the stars, and learned what it meant to be healed.

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RangeExpanderRangeExpanderover 2 years ago

Thank you for showing us how much we open ourselves up to unbearable pain when we love wholeheartedly. It helps to share your characters' senses of love and betrayal. And then the burning pain of the time apart. Aaaaargh!

KrchherzjlofcKrchherzjlofcabout 4 years ago

This is absolutely beautiful writing. Your talent is beyond!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I came for smut. I stayed because you ripped out my heart and beat me over the head with it in a way very few writers can do. You're amazing and should be a professional writer, this is truly talented writing and you've got me thoroughly attached to these characters and this story. Awesome job, 11/10 <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
the captains heart is so big

I love the captin, his heart, his anger, sadness, forgiveness and grace, hes a man that understands you can fight, get so frustratingly mad at the one you love, and still stay deeply in love with that person with their flaws and mistakes, love im

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
yes, and then the song

poesie, eternity strung high in the rigging. waiting and then finding more....it will take a complete read over and over to capture the story. jumping from phrase to crafted phrase, this is an exercise in comprehension of soul, of timelessness suspended. so we wait for the next, and we sleep in the song of the stars

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