All Comments on 'The Pirate Queen's Prisoner Ch. 01'

Great story so far, I can't wait to see what the captain does next!

This was such a slovenly ill-conceived story. The grammar is all over the place. You apparently aren't acquainted with proper pronouns as the 'Pirate Queen' changes gender numerous times throughout the story. Your spelling is pretty awful too. For the sake of any readers that stumble across this pile of garbage, please obtain an editor or at least re-visit with a spelling and grammar check. Next, employ a little bit of logic as to your story line. It is ridiculously far-fetched and laughable. Nothing arousing about it whatsoever!

lol what? this is my favourite story on this site

I come here to read it often