All Comments on 'The Pit of the Nine Sisters'

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Thomas99Thomas99almost 11 years ago
I agree with Zedan

it finished like it was cut off from the rest of the story

ZebanZebanover 13 years ago
Disappointing ending

I think you could have taken this story further instead of stopping the way you did. Great beginning and middle though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very hot

very hot indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
boring

boring

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