All Comments on 'The Pits'

Congrats on your first story, Weeping. Nice job, it has an interesting sci-fi feeling to it.

Especially the initial tension of Lena and WIlliam, he watching her like bait for whomever will take her out only to be beguiled by her in time.

Great read!

Loved it, especially the other-worldly feel to it.

Simply...left me wanting more...!!!

I love the beginning. Please keep going.

Fantastic lead to the sex. You really need to finish it.