All Comments on 'The Play Party'

some party!

Very well written and very realistically done too. You gave just enough description to allow the reader to imagine the situation without overly dictating the images which always causes me problems!

I hope there will be more.

Very well done, but not overdone. I am impressed, MP.

Keep it up

You have completely captured my attention with one of your stories. i loved it, but i just wonder who exactly did you have in mind when You were writing violet? *grins* come to think of it, violet and Alex seem quite familiar to me *giggles* on a serious note, very, very well done and i do hope that You will publish some more of Your stories here on lit, Master. i told You i wasn't just being biased when i tell You how wonderful they are! *winks*

Indeed, bravo, you did an excellent job on this story, everything I came to hope for, and more, from talking with you on teh forum. Again, bravo.

Great Story, and I hope to hear more from Alex, Violet and Tasha!