All Comments on 'The Players Revolt'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The biter bit ...

... how sweet that is ;) ! A great story, MELD9003 - thank you for sharing it with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please include non-consent trigger warnings

Please be respectful and include trigger warnings if you post rape stories in any section other than non-consent. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please write a second story

I'll admit I was a little turned off at first alhough Shannon's determination to be a cum guzzling whore to prove her strength and eventually submission was a huge turn on. I liked the ending where someone showed Shannon some compassion and I want to see what happens with her and Naseen next.

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Hi Sparks is now available at amazon. I promise new material will be available soon. Kind regards MELD