All Comments on 'The Pleasing, Submissive Wife Ch. 01'

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thebuffalothebuffaloalmost 10 years ago

Not a bad first effort. It does need to be fleshed out a bit and it is a bit stiff in the telling.

JamesRichJamesRichover 9 years ago
Sounds like Savvy's about...

...to get used! Great start for a series.

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