by Kinky_Velvet
Great story. I really liked both parts. I would suggest that you describe the physical traits of the girl and also the size of the penises invading her body.
I love it! But personally, I do NOT want to hear her parts described, or the size of the members. That gets SO trite and cliched. When I hear that she was 32 D and he was 9 inches long... I stop reading. Pert or thick or long? Fine. But still not necessary.
Part three is pending and will be available to you guys soon. There are, as requested, more 'maulings by the hellhound' and some more detailed descriptions of the main characters. ^-^