All Comments on 'The Poker Game Ch. 02'

Kelly excellent work! You really got a rise out of me in more than one way.

See you in the forums.

great story....wow...to hear a woman's point of view...to hear what is going on through her head..this was excellent.

Yeah, see you in the forums you evil ass bitch.

The most times I’d ever had anal sex in one night before this was twice and it was becoming a little much.

You use commas when you don't need them and when you need them, like in this sentence, they are nowhere to be found. You mix your tenses up continually. Give it up girl. You suck!