All Comments on 'The Politician's Daughter Ch. 01'

I love all you work, keep it up

This is so well written. Please hurry up with the next part :) ;)

Waiting for Part 2 . Thanks

Very well done. Nice job setting up the back story! Looking forward to Part II.

Thanks!

Another fascinating story... Well written and wonderful... Can't wait for the next parts

Super Hot story ! More please soon !

Long, well written...and highly irritating! Lol :).

Yummy, more please.

When I got to the part where she heard her father on the phone, I could feel the betrayal she felt. Of course she's angry. From there I didn't think I would like the story. And, I don't. But, I do. You know - that love hate thing. I could feel her pain, how she felt her father was just using her as a cover for the life he really wanted.

This is the best kind of story, one that pulls on your emotions, our humanity.

Thanks for writing. Sly

You're late! You said a week! C'mon, c'mon, c'mon!!

I apologize for the delay. Part II (conclusion) is submitted and should be posted 11/24 or 11/25. Thanks. --Carnal

You're really building up the tension. Can't wait for more of this series!

This was so good! I loved the build-up and the tension between Allison and her father. And that kiss was so HOT! I am dying for part 2. I'm checking back tomorrow, hope it will be posted.

Kuddos for writing such a well thought-out and well crafted story. I have written a number of stories on this theme using powerful & wealthy men as strong characters along with equally confident teens who thrive on men of stature. As a female writer I have been told that telling stories of this nature have a much different delivery, with the focus being on intense consensual pleasure. Great job!

the build-up is mesmerizing... Just read it again :)

There's a reason why I always come back to your profile to seek out new stories - you are easily one of the BEST writers in this genre! I absolutely LOVED this and am going to read the next installment now, but I first had to leave this message for you. Thanks so much for writing such great material, it makes me pant and groan like very little else!! :)

it makes you look stupid

I don't even recall how many times I've read this story, it is just so well written and one of my favorites. I feel like I know these characters, like they are part of my world, I feel their pain and love, it is just amazing storytelling!

Anxiously waiting to read chapter two . . . .