All Comments on 'The Pond'

I think many women have never 'let go' to enjoy the ultimate sexual joy, thinking it was 'dirty' or unladylike. My wife was that way--she'd never had an orgasm until after we were married. She was the 'Connie' in this story. I generally followed Erin's steps, getting my wife to enjoy the pleasures of sex.

It didn't take long until she was reveling in her new-found womanhood, and I became the object of her lust.

Your story portrays the situation many young women face, and thanks for posting it.

Well-written, sensitive, realistic and fun to read. Five stars.

I loved it. I felt you captured true sensuality, sexuality, and civility in a sexual union. Keep writing! *S*

very good,I enjoyed it greatly keep up the good work!

This really was all about sexuality in a sensual way - how to get to terms with body, excitement, lust and bliss - how to become connected with self and others.

Very well written. Thank you!

(I should now look into other stories you have written ...)

This is wonderful. Soft, slow, sensual and very gentle. Healing.

Yes, healing.

A lovely story of transformation and salvation.

I don’t think “The Pond” will bring up thoughts of me me, but maybe

Thank you