All Comments on 'The Pony Ranch Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More please

I hope there is more, it definitely has the makings for a cool story - please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Make chapter 3

Make chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well, probably another unfinished story. Way too short and too quick to get a good character description or development. Too bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, too bad it looks to be another unfinished story. Started out fairly good but there was no real character development. Too short of chapters like a "wham, bam, thank you mamm" very short story.

EmmintEmmint5 months ago

I'd love to hear more of Stacey. Perhaps her boyfriend could try to recue her and be reduced to the status of a puppy or pig.

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