All Comments on 'The Pool'

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 12 years ago
Not bad

Not a bad story, went a bit fast with little buildup.

Is sex with an in-law really insest? I wouldn't think so since they are not blood related.

sirhugssirhugsabout 12 years ago
What happened when wife got home?

did she join in the fun?

writerjabwriterjababout 12 years ago
Decent story ...

I hate to be critical but will be. I read too many times how the man "started" to do something. Perhaps four different times. I would think in sex, the first time a person would start something, and each succeeding amount of foreplay or intercourse would be "next" or "I then proceeded to.'

The cliche of rubbing on suntan lotion is a common ploy too. Still, the thought of fucking his wife's sister, well, that is always a good idea!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 12 years ago
He and his wife need to take his wife's sister to one of the swing parties they go to

That's how she could have two dicks in her at once, and have two guys shoot their load in her at the same time.

A good story, thanks for the read...

RockyStoneRockyStoneabout 12 years ago
Decent fantasy

Not really a story though; it was sort of hot. Me, my cock, and I is what this is all about and why I say is a fantasy.

RS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

More to cum hopefully with wife joining in

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