The Pool

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Jason slowly inserted two long, graceful fingers inside me. He didn't even move them at first, just let them sit and waited for what I'd do. I tightened my fingers in his hair and rocked against his hand. Taking that as his cue, he curled his fingers inside me to touch the front wall of my vagina and began to stroke, concentrating his licks on my clit.

I knew that spot Jason was hitting well, but Matthew was the only man I'd ever been with and he didn't have any compelling desire to find it. It was a completely different experience to cum from someone else rubbing it. My consciousness shifted three inches up and to the right of my physical body as my hands shook in Jason's black hair and I gasped like a fish, explosive release of tensions I didn't even know had built up giving way to waves of pleasure.

He stayed between my legs, gently licking up and down my lips but staying clear of my clit as I came down from my orgasm. He rested the side of his face against my inner thigh and looked up at me. "You are so incredibly beautiful. I could do that every day, just to see you smile like that." He stood up, his erection tenting his shorts, just a foot from my face. I sat forward and gently squeezed the head through the slippery fabric. I thought his knees were going to give way. "Ohhhhh, Kate, I..." he swallowed hard, but he didn't move my hand. "Don't tease me. Not unless you want me to..."

"I want you," I cut him off, my orgasm afterglow making me bold in lust. "I wish you'd barged into my room and given me what I really wanted last night."

Jason pulled me up from the chair and kissed me, hot and probing as he shucked his shorts off. His erection hit my belly with insistent heat. I felt for it blindly, not wanting to break the kiss. Jason felt different from how I remembered Dad looked. He felt about the same size and girth, but he was more tapered at the base of his shaft and had a broad, swollen head, slick with the precum bubbling up from his slit. He kept kissing me but turned so our positions were reversed, then sat down in the chair, his knees spread. Without hesitation, I climbed up and straddled his hips. I grasped his shaft and worked his crown back and forth along my throbbing lips, pausing in the circuit to rub it against my clit.

Jason grabbed my hips and bucked up, pushing me down. He filled me in two strokes, unable to contain himself while I warmed up any longer. I matched my down-strokes to his rhythm and closed my eyes. This was my father's cock, on my bed when I was eighteen. It was Matthew's, in a parallel universe where he could love me completely. It was every man I was now free to fuck who actually wanted me. But finally, it was Jason's. I had to open my eyes to see him. Nothing in my fantasy was as hot as my brother, his cheeks flushing and his breathing ragged as he churned against me from below. "Kate, I'm gonna...I can't, I'm gonna..." I ripped away from him just in time for fountaining spurts of cum to hit us both on the belly.

Something snapped awake in me, looking down at our skin, the same color where it wasn't tanned, with identical chocolate brown freckles. Our skin, which was exactly the same, covered in my little brother's cum. His eyes were closed. He was breathing hard through his peaceful grin, which was slightly, charmingly lopsided, just like our Dad's.

I got up and looked around for some way to wash his cum off me. I didn't see anything immediately, so I padded over to the sliding glass door and out into the black drizzle. I walked to the edge of the deep end of the pool and dropped in, sinking down halfway, then folding my legs.

I am building a time machine in my mind to save myself from making a very particular kind of mistake.

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draig_OMalley2draig_OMalley2over 7 years ago

Loved all the tendrils of tension in this story. Not normally an incest fan, but this one drew me in with multiple placement of questions that the reader wants resolved. A realistic human story in which characters move through stages of development toward the conclusion. Very well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Confusing

This story doesn't make sense. It's about sibcest apparently, but . . . the MC actually has incestuous fantasies about her dad. The author goes into that in two long scenes. And then, voila! All of a sudden, these are transferred to the bro. The reason for that is kind of lame. Seems to be just cause she's feeling vulnerable and well, he's there. Would she do any male relative? Incest fantasy doesn't transfer like that.

The pool is some kind of symbolic thing connected to the dad. Hmmm. Should we puzzle this out?

And what about the bad marriage? Why did she accept such a bad situation for so long? Hmmm should we puzzle that out?

Or are these meant to be fluid atmospheric illuminations of character?

On top of that the MC is so unlikeable. Self-absorbed. Flat, Cynical. Bitter. Seems to be introspective but isn't really. (Avoiding her dad problem for one thing.)

It's a well written, confused mess of an incest tale.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
what I liked...

...about this story was how cleverly you weaved together three disparate stories. A believable main storyline as the base to support the two separate storyarcs in introspection.

And if you get the inspiration you already have the foundation to a much larger novella.

LoveMenLoveSexLoveMenLoveSexabout 9 years ago
Fascinating story

I was astonished by the comments this story has received, considering that not only is it extraordinarily readable, but actually explores the way it's possible to justify and rationalise things into normality when they occur so regularly. I sympathised with Kate and found both primary characters believeable - due to the slow and careful building of their backgrounds! - and the secondary characters realistic as well. People come in all shapes, sizes and flavours and most of the time truth is a helluva lot stranger than fiction.

The development here was well thought out, pacing punctuated perfectly by memories and the pain of the past, each scene adding depth to the next. The flow was smooth overall and the descriptive narration was fresh and exciting, nary an expression to drag me from the story (the same cannot be said for authors who insist on their character's eyes "bouncing around the restaurant" or "lips crashing together" - mashed against teeth not being my style).

It's not an easy topic but as a taboo one, it evokes it's own excitement, and the trick is to provide a plausible reason - you did and I enjoyed this tale for the characters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
what the hello is this crap

1 star for the skim thru of this rambling wreck of a tale.

1* to go away on

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