All Comments on 'The Pool'

by esselle

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Northpacific2017Northpacific2017over 6 years ago
Interesting

A good start, I presume there maybe more later?

NorthPacific

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 6 years ago
Yes, please!

DO continue! :+)) I'm already halfway upstairs! :+)

joelafayettejoelafayetteover 6 years ago
potential

It's so short that I think you should submit the whole story as one piece. Anyway, bring it on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Both chapters could of been in one

Too short n i found this on accident looking for as another part to the next chapter. I got lucky and notice they belong together. Mark them as a series... easier to follow story

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