All Comments on 'The Pool - A Sally and Nate Story'

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pepepilotpepepilotalmost 6 years ago
Part 2?

Is part 2 in the works?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
5 stars

It was not bad. There was a story instead of a vague setup to a sex scene. If would have been better if MS . Dobson was found floating face down in the pool, but that us what second chapters are for.

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