All Comments on 'The Pool Party'

Chelsea said she didn't care for sex, then fucked her anyway. Why change your mind midstory? Also, descriptions would've helped.

I like how "Anonymous" was astute enough to note the contradiction, but s/he didn't bother to read the author's note explaining why the descriptions weren't there. Personally, I very much enjoyed filling in the blanks for myself! As for the contradiction: if you still want to keep it, you could say that after she said that she didn't care for sex, she felt completely seduced and changed her mind. Thanks a bunch for this hot story!

Decent

Much as I like the idea of lesbian foot fetishes, the sadly-inevitable painted toenails that were introduced into the story made me cringe. The only real reason for toenail polish is to conceal dirt. Anything else is conjecture.

I know author Chris 2010 states that we can alter the story to taste, but the painted toenails make me feel queasy. Their presence completely ruins a good contribution.

Not bad !

wonderful lesbian foot sex, i had my fingers deep in my vagina and came twice reading it.