All Comments on 'The Pool Party -- How It All Started'

That was a fun read!

I agree with the previous comment, sound like a fun party.

Interesting start and you demonstrate writing talent that should only get better.

I hope you take this good start further

"Rock hard" has gotten to be a cliche. Try to find some other term that is descriptive but neither overused nor just plain untrue.

Did your wife feel anyone of the guys cocks go up in her cunt.if I was there she sat on my lap I would of made sure my cock was buried in her cunt fucked till I shot my sperm in her cunt made sure she got pregnant from me.

a very happy story. what we wish were happening each day.

That would be fun. I don't think my husband would let me show off my double D's like that. He likes for me to dress sexy when we go to a beach town.

I loved the story. Naked people are beautiful.

Everyone had a blast! Sure wish I had been there with them.