All Comments on 'The Porcelain Soul'

I liked the entire story, it didnot make me hard, but it is SEXY in a very interesting manner; as she was also his release.

I think there is a para that needs work.

The paragraph is where his hands are at her breasts and carressing. Then, instead of just bringing his hand down to play with her pussy, he goes into tickle mode to "draw his left hand down her chest, and tummy, lightly tickling her skin, as he lowers his hand to her wet, warm pussy.

I like yur wrk.

Rudy

I usually sidestep this category, but I read this story. I like it. It's brief, but it wouldn't need to be much longer. You could probably stand one sequel, but I'd be careful about staying in this category; maybe a story in Erotic Couplings, instead.

Regardless, this story is a very pleasant piece.

-- KVK

A romantic ending. Not so much a spook story but a love story. I liked it.

This is the best Halloween entry I've read so far. It's romantic, sexy, and detailed with great dialogue, believable characters, and an intelligent premise. It also had some nice misdirection, making it not so predictable. Good luck!

with a wonderful balance of sex to non-sex elements. As a matter of fact the sex was a bit abrupt, but the quality of the erotic writing made up for that. Very different kind of story which you obviously put a lot of work into. Bravo!

What a delightful story, well written, fantastic dialogue and pacing. It captured both a sweet, romantic, almost melancholy or bittersweetness (even or maybe even especially in the erotic moments) as well as a charming kind of realistic humor. And then there was that wonderfully eerie twist at the end. **shiver** Great job. Good luck in the contest!

I liked the build-up towards the ending, and the dirty talk between the characters was spicy. Very nice descriptions. Not your usual stroke story.

That was cool.. I see Im not the only one with necropihlic intentions tjis halloween... *winx*

An entertaining story. Good luck in the contest! ~Imp

"Horror" I suppose it must be called, but this is a delightful and charming story as well. One ends with a few qualms about how precisely some of the plot ties up, but the emotions and characters in this are charming and a genuine pleasure to encounter. Thank you for a good read.

I really enjoyed your story, it had the right blend of horror and romance Good luck in the contest!

Cookie :)

although I agree it's more romance than horror.

Nevertheless a very entertaining read.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

This story was romantic and had just the right combination of sex and dialogue. I also liked how everything worked out for Jake at the end. And it was well written. You're gonna do really great in the contest :)

This was simply an outstanding piece. The story was great, and the sex stuff was great. Nothing was over the top, which would have been out of place in this lovely story. I hope you submit more in the future.

...this was darn near literature! Some stories on this site are so wonderful that it makes me wonder if some "established author" isn't moonlighting in writing some anonymous erotica. Yours was definitely one of the better written stories I've read here.

Thought I'd look through the erotic horror stories as Halloween is not too far around the corner. This is an incredibly well crafted piece of literature, as the previous reviewer posted. Very sweet, nice dialogue, wonderful descriptions of the sex, and a tidy ending to boot. Perhaps too tidy as one reviewer mentioned, but just as some folks like an ending that's a bit ambiguous, others prefer a story that comes full circle and ties up loose endings. Well done, and I hope you post more work soon.

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Excellent!

11/10!!!!!