by Wyden Long
None of this story is believable. None of it. Not at all! The only reason that I read all four chapters was because if I'm going to leave a negative comment, I like to try to back it up. Even if I can't quite put my thoughts into words, I will read all of the story so that at least I know that I have grounds for leaving negative comments. These stories are so horrible that I can't even consider how to go about critiquing this monstrosity!
For those who are thinking about reading the remaining chapter, it only gets worse!
Her breasts are "chunks of meat"—? Wow! You really do have a way with words.