All Comments on 'The Potting Shed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wonderful start.

I enjoyed reading your story, I hope to read more of it soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Tenses!

First person, present tense, active tense, past tense... too hard to read!

maddictmaddictabout 1 year ago

One and done, we all hoped for more (!)

How nice it would have been if Julie took Suzie home to find out she was submissive to another woman. Of course unlucky Suzie is out through her paces as the bottom

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