All Comments on 'The Powder'

What else can this powder do... Hopefully we will now... Please continue this story... Thanks

Good premise and writing but where are you going? and when?

This is, hands down, the most erotic story I have ever read on Literotica. I came TWICE while reading this masterpiece...and I'm still horny. Thank you so much for sharing this with your readers.

This is simply the best fetish / mind control story I have ever read. 5 stars - and a reminder to everyone that mere excellence should only get 4 so that rare perfection like this can stand out!

Please write more.

...and beautifully written. Such an arousing coupling. Am closing the laptop now to take care of and release my pent up desire and sexual tension. Hot hot hot story!

Maybe more chapters - a sequel or part 2?

story anyway. Both female characters were well drawn, displaying a sweetness not often seen on this site.