All Comments on 'The Power of Naked Pictures Ch. 01 Pt. 03'

by RogerogerThat

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
better than chapters 1 and 2 but still

a bit unbelievable.you'se wouldn't speak/see each other except 4 times in week yet sitting in her room waiting she comes in and without very much persuasion she agrees to suck your "9" soda can"cock as long its last time and pics deleted

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Keep it up

Keep it up 3 things I would do in next chapters 1 he black mailed sis and they both loved it he needs to do the sma to his mom or2 have mom catch them or 3 have her join them that's what I would do but its ur story do what you want these might be ideas for ur up coming chapters keep it up

Darklust

RogerogerThatRogerogerThatalmost 9 years agoAuthor
@darklust

I can guarantee you'll see both options 2 and 3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I agree...she will be back for more. This time she went with how her body felt and her hard cum plus her brother cumming in her mouth and she cleaned him up; was a very good sign !! She enjoyed it. Cannot wait for the next chapter, which should be much hotter and she will probably find a way to get Jake back to her room to do him this time. Thanks !!

snaggsnoffsnaggsnoffalmost 9 years ago
Great chapter

Love the story. I miss the blackmailing aspect. But its great that the character has his sister in his hands now. Maybe some anal in the future?

eye84ueye84ualmost 9 years ago
Update?

Hopefully we see the next installment in this fantastic series in the near future.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great!

Favorite one so far, but PLEASE don't get mom involved I like their story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
please continue

I loved it and I want to see more but you probably won't make a pt. 4 but it was a really good story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
DAMM

if you do a part 4 plz have anel

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please write more

Please write more to this story it's such a good story would be asham just to stop it their!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I would love another chapter

Please do write another chapter, it has been quite enjoyable all far

TLMorganTLMorganalmost 6 years ago

Been a few years but if you're still around, I think the brother should get a real crack at her pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I think you should learn basic human anatomy and possibly have sex yourself before writing about a subject you clearly have only read about. I mean how old are you, 15?

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