All Comments on 'The Power of the Goddess'

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mBrowmBrowover 6 years ago
Nice take! Or nice seduction ...

Despite some typos, the story was fairly well done, much better than the "train wreck" recently cited. Thanks, and please keep writing!

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I appreciate everyone's feedback from the stories and hope you enjoy them. It is hard for me to write patiently at times and I know sometimes there are errors in grammar or spelling as I tend to rush through some parts. The moments I get caught up in the most tend to come ou...

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