by shaqrach2
Hi,
nice par for your story!
I like the direction you are taking!
Please don't take too long for the next part!
I really liked the story up to the point you said 194 lbs on a woman was slightly overweight. On what planet! Have you ever seen a 194 lb woman? 135/140 is slightly overweight...194 is morbidly obese unless she is 8 1/2 feet tall !! Maybe you need more experience with women before you write about them....or at least get a woman to proof read your submissions before you make them.
Glad to see you are writing again. I can't wait for the next installment, until then great job
So surprised and glad to see that you wrote another part to this story. Please continue and soon. I hope the voice won't try to take control.
Was wandering when when one of them would get pregnant it was only a meter of time. I was actually hoping it was the virgin who was young and single. This guy is crazy really, Faye maybe his first slave but she is a mature married woman and he’s only for himself. Clearly he did stop and think about his power and Prioritise on how to use it more too his advantage. What a fucking dumb arse..