All Comments on 'The Power to Control Ch. 03'

Everything about the story is great, loving the plot line. Thank you also for publishing daily, glad you are doing it this way, always hate it when people have part of their stories published and never finish or take way to long to continue them. First read of the day everyday. Keep it up

5 stars

Get a proofreader. Great story so far but tripping over word misuse and spelling errors is jarring.

...to spell this poorly. I'm loving the story, and some of the wording flubs are unintentionally humorous, but most are like hitting deep potholes on the highway. They interrupt the smooth flow of the journey.

This story would be a 5-star effort, but minus 2-stars for all of the many, repeated misspellings and other errors. For instance, "sweat" instead of "sweet", I mean, c'mon now! You can't even blame that on an overzealous spell-checker.

Love the story plz plz plz finish it