All Comments on 'The Practice Ch. 01'

. . Is what I think about the tale you have told, Thanks for wild ride.

This is really quite engrossing.

First off, your story has a wonderful plot line. I have a feeling tho, that there's lots more to come. As I read this, I kept asking myself if Jordon was living a dream, or was he still hypnotized, and what of the bikini photo?? Was it some kind've trigger ?? Fascinating stuff. Thank you for sharing

Bob.

Every boy's fantasy, too good to be true,

but told so well -- it just might be real.

This is really good...I wish that you had continued it.