All Comments on 'The Practice Pt. 01: Hannah 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Excellent start

I just wanted to thank you for the excellent start you have made to writing here. I do hope you will continue with this story, and the style in which you write. Often, stories here descend into unnecessary crudity in language and style. You have not. Well done.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 8 years ago
Oh my!

This is very good! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Just starting to read now

Very good start thank you

Looking forward to the read It seems a nice long tale!

AviciaAviciaalmost 2 years ago

I hate her parents but at least you had her enjoy it

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 1 year ago

The length was adequate but I hope they get longer. I’m not quite sure why she submitted so quickly. It’s odd the doctor took her virginity; l would have expected his clients to demand virgins. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

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