by venuzian
Very good submission lots of details which drew me in. Loved the erotic nature without the slam bam fuckin of other submissions
Great story end to end. Enjoyed the writing so well n smoothly described n carefully woven. Impressed. Five stars..keep up the good writing..
Five stars on the top.
Nice story. Enjoyed the writing so flawless n smooth. No vulgar nature but nice n erotic.
Thanks. Write more, Good luck