All Comments on 'The Predator Becomes The Prey Ch. 02'

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OOAAOOAAover 9 years ago
Excellent story!!!

Congrats!

impo_58impo_58over 9 years ago
For now...

For now this story doesn't deserve any comments...just 1*...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
rag head

allah crap tell

arch3rarch3rover 9 years ago
Verry HOttt!!

Fantastic story keep going!!

mitchawamitchawaalmost 6 years ago
writing

This story does not show any improvement over earlier stories. Get an editor their free.

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