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by Explorer222

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shaneeshaneealmost 15 years ago
Oooohh Novel use of Brushes!

Besides being I am freelance editor, I also paint! I LOVED the way you use brushes in the story!! It has given me a whole new perspective on art!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!

loves_to_shareloves_to_shareover 12 years ago
another excellent story

great stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
35c

Just so you know 35c is not a valid bra size.

pops12345pops12345almost 6 years ago
Bravo

Awesome work. I noticed a few errors but nothing jarring. You did a great piece and I will look at your other work.

boffer51boffer51over 2 years ago

So where's the story about when Elizabeth got there??

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