All Comments on 'The Price of Embezzlement Ch. 01'

I like the humorous little touches. The unsexy panties she hasn't planned to show anyone, the doing things out of order, the "I'll be the one telling you to do lewd things on the office, I trust I'll be the only one." Bathos is awesome.

@joy_of_cooking: Thanks! The second chapter is written and is publishing soon!

I like him waiting until she thinks she has escaped before pulling the rug out. I also like how well you capture her state of mind. I hope you have time to write more of this, between your other commissions that is. 😁

@qxvx198: I love that too! Pulling the rug of from under a character is so much fun. But yeah I've got other commissions to work on 😏 I'm working hard to make them as good as this one, if not even better 😁

Perfectly written! Would love to read more!

@Anon: Good news! Part 2 is posting soon!

Right now I am wondering what made the husband commission a story about this particular theme.. are they in the same situation?? 🤗 well written!

Well, a very interesting start to, hopefully, will be a long and humiliating adventure for Ruth. I wonder what kind of things will happen at the office? I wonder what kinds of things will happen at her home? Will Brent "visit" her at her home? Will he take her to some conventions and show her off (maybe make her wear a mask to keep her identity secret)? So many options await.

Hi, very nicely written! What goes through my mind is whether the husband is asking for this particular theme because they have a similar situation at home?

@Mina_: Thank you! The second chapter should be posting soon! I don't know why the customer wanted this for his wife, but I was happy to write it. It was a very fun experience! ❤️

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@Anon: I appreciate the praise! I think you will like the story as it progresses, but not spoilers 😁

Well, this was definitely fun. Nicely written!

@AlinaX: I appreciate the praise! I really enjoyed writing this story, and hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter just as much. It's a bit spicer! 😏

Promising start and very well written. Chapter 2 soon?

@Altissimus: Thanks so much! I'm uploading Chapter 2 tonight. It would publish in a few days

Great start, I'm looking forward to reading the next one when I get a chance.

@Mogrem: I'm glad you enjoyed it! There's at least one more chapter of this story, beyond what's published. So hopefully we can get to that before too long

Cute little pink panties with a white heart!

I've often wondered what corporate women wear under their crisp white blouses and those tight skirts. Now I know. I slung you a five.

@electricblue66: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 😁 It didn't have any diacritics, which must have been a plus for you. 🤭 The question is, how did you like the first person present tense?

Great story I love the details. I loved the part that she started to get turned on by it all. Also, the fact that he had such control over her.

@Magellanic14: I'm thrilled that you liked it! ❤️ The D/s nature of this story flows so naturally I think

Great lead in this should be great

@Seekingcontrol: Glad to have you along for the ride

Thank you for directing me to this story. Can't wait to read further. You've got a great slow burn going here, making me tingle.

@Mastered_again: I'm so glad you liked it! 😁