by Audrey07
I couldn't think of a title for this comment but oh well. It seems the first page came out entirely in italics but the second was normal. Aside from that, this chapter was worth the wait. There shouldn't be any complaints about little plot and a good amount of sex. I certainly don't see anything wrong with it.
Every chapter leaves you wanting the next. Can't wait to see what happens next. Very enjoyable story to read. Have to agree with ARaven... about plot and sex. Keep the chapters coming.
SB
Thank you all! I have just now submitted the next chapter, so hopefully it will be up in a few days. Fingers crossed, I hope you enjoy it!