All Comments on 'The Prince of As-Datan'

Pretty silly.

I've read "Sad Sack" comic books with more erotic content!

You may have gotten a little too deep into your world building and backstory for the first part to a story on this site, but it really worked for me at the end. I would definitely want to see more.

Ignore the other anonymous comments, this was brilliant - little too much back story but it worked 👍

This whole chapter is kinda back story. Looking forward for a lot more about chapters showing their son's life. A good effort, but would be vain if you don't continue.

This story could use a sequel even if you haven't planned it as such.

The prince(ss) can get revenge on her brother all the while the King is helping her do this to get her even more fully under his control. Plus there can be more sexy times :P