All Comments on 'The Princess & the Queen'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Most ingenious!

Clever and highly erotic at the same time. A rare combination. Well done!

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 5 years ago
That was wonderful.

I would love to read more in that setting even if you need to use different characters. I am curious how you explain the problem with the sun. Thanks

PennameWombatPennameWombatalmost 5 years agoAuthor
The sun

As to their sun in the story, a sequel tale will indeed delve into their discovery of what happened and how it'll affect their society. It'll have a carry over of a few characters and introduce new ones.

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Long-time writer of computer software, technical documents, papers and more boring stuff. Long-time pretend writer of fiction, erotic and other, but never put these latter 'out there.' It's time. Many of my stories take place in what I call "Mel's Universe," after the female l...