All Comments on 'The Princess Awakes'

We have all dreamed of being a princess, this is so much better! thank you

and now I read what hte 13 year old girl dreams of.

Thanks for your comments, well the first one anyway. Glad you appreciated it.

To the other comment, I don't mind negative criticism; that's why I enabled public comments. It would be really helpful though if you could explain exactly what you thought was wrong with it.

Kisses,

Helen.

jerky and mechanical. I found nothing that even hints of erotisism in this. Sorry

I think I see what you mean. There's no 'emotional' content to the story. It's simply a description of certain acts. Next time maybe I'll try and make my characters 'believable'.

Thanks again.

Helen.