by fishgrad2004
...the continuing adventures of Natalie and Ms. Blake should be very entertaining for some time.
Loved it...can`t wait for Part 2...when she further explores the submissive student
Well done, and VERY well balanced! Not only was this very erotic and beautifully written, you pulled off -gloriously- what others fumble at, ham-handedly, namely: domination with an emphasis on mutual benefit for both women, and even dare I say, love? Or at least the possibility for a relationship or future, even after high school. I loved that the Principle was focusing not only on her pleasure but making it pleasurable for her girl, taking her thoughts and feelings into consideration, even while in Mistress Mode. Big points for that!
Too often what we see with Domination here is either Fap-Fiction, one-sided wish fulfillment tripe that's either really clumsy and boring or thinly disguised, anger-fueled rape fantasies. Neither of which are sexy or fun to read, mostly alarming and disturbing, especially the latter.
You, however, have crafted a very fine yarn in such a small space, and I do hope you grace us with sequel to these wonderful characters. You've certainly got the material and a fabulous beginning for it. I'd love to learn more about these women as their relationship unfolds.
Well Done.
I was wet after the first paragraph. I need to CUM so bad.
EXCELLENT WELL CRAFTED; as mentioned by another reviewer, The Principal goes out of her way to enjoy as well as satisfy the girl. Very EROTIC and very tasefull.. The Episodes are well described,
Could we have Sequel/s
The Story has potential to be carried further, (a) The principal takes the girl 'HOME' (b) after one or two encounters Principal has a Joint session with Girl and the Other Teacher who first discovered Her masturbating. (c) the other Teacher brings along another girl for a Long Session.- the teacher and principal swap their partners.