All Comments on 'The Prom Date - Jack & Aunt Julia'

They go to a hotel with a restaurant and are only offered 'burger and fries'? Come on, this is supposed to be a seduction of some sort, isn't it? Burger and fries! She should have kept the room just for herself and left him out in the rain.

Don't pay any attention to that nitwit with the bad commentary. Burger and fries was not the focus of the story. The hot sex with the sexy "aunt" was a very interesting storyline. The problem with the public feedback is sometimes you get some immature high school kids who think they are literary experts. Well, if they think they can do better then they should submit their own stories. Otherwise, they should shut their pie hole and enjoy the story like the rest of us. Once again I enjoyed reading about Jack and his aunt...How about including mom next time?

Well lets put it this way, if the other guy is more worried about his burger and fries than what is happening in the room...then maybe he should be reading a MacDonald's menu instead of this story.

Very well written...hope there is a part 2.

Especially looking forward to seeing how he explains being with Aunty instead of going to the prom LOL

The story was fine. Quite exciting actually. That tool a few posts down who is complaining about the hamburgers should shove a Big Mac up his ass.

Hmm, they're not blood relatives, how many times did that needed to be mentioned? This is GREAT writing here: About a week before prom he sits down to eat some dinner. Really? Wow!

Nothing was realistic about this story in the least. What frickin' hotel doesn't take credit cards? Probably doesn't get much business either.

During the first segment of your tale, I kept thinking that his Mom was totally clueless, pimping for his Aunt like that. However, when she passed him a ‘wad’ of dough as he was leaving, the clueless appellation left the building and was replaced by the ‘sneaky old broad’ moniker. After all, she did ‘talk it over’ with her adopted Sister (what could they have discussed? I mean, when the dust settles out, they are Females.). --- Anyone want to bet he doesn’t have a whole lot of explaining to do on his arrival at home? Wonder if Mom will want to see the ‘photos’? ;-) Can’t wait for chapter two of this winner, besides, I’m sure Mom’s tired of ‘vibing’ herself off and he has already done his ‘Aunt’. Why let perfectly good, well maintaned vagina go to waste (anyone remember the state she kept the car in)? -K. A.-

this was is a great story. i would like to read a chapter 2.

Cute tale. It would have been better if not written in present tense. Otherwise, it was a bit implausible, but not overly so.

-- KK in Texas

...PURE, DUMB, LUCK & a horny aunt!

Very nice little story without an excess of words. Just one question: I notice that in the first two paragraphs you wrote "go to prom." Most people, I think, feel that prom should be modified with the indefinite or definite article, as "go to the prom." Is this a mid-west peculiarity, or are you a displaced Englishman?

I thought it was a pretty good tale, I mean, reality is not what we're about here. This guy didn't even have stress a 14 inch cock or any such crap to make a semi-plausible and entertaining story.

A lot of people, me included, have aunts and uncles who are only a couple of years older so that's no stretch either.

It wasn't Shakespeare, but if it's Shakespeare you're looking for - you're on the wrong website.

AND THEN HE GETS MOM

Well written. It was a good read, I would love to see a chapter 2 to this story where instead of as another put it he gets mom the two women share him with each other

never made it to Prom

what happened to the Prom?

Too bad they did not make the prom before the motel.

Eight years, that's no big deal. And there not blood kin, so let it go. But what's next??, when mom finds out. That's a start to chapter 02: ......good luck,nice read thanks

Thanks for inspiring me to write another incest story based on the Aunt/Nephew dynamic. I'm mostly disinterested in cross generation incest. But I really enjoyed 'Aunt Julia' being only 8 years older than Jackson. But even better than that, it reminded of a good friend that I have lost touch with. This former coworker is probably about 4 or 5 years younger than me. We became good friends while working together and I got to meet most of his family. His mother had him as a teenager, but even so his grandmother's youngest child was a daughter born a couple of years later making his Aunt Catherine younger than her nephew! I had a huge crush on Catherine and I later found out that she was attracted to me too when she accidentally-on-purpose gave me a clear view down the neck of her blouse exposing that she wasn't wearing a bra and showing me her tits. But I never acted on that, mainly because I respected my friendship first and because I was already married second. I made the correct choice even though Catherine would have been a better wife to me than the girl I was married to. 4/5

Only reading these for a few months, this was one of the first. I keep coming back to this one, it's by far the best I've read EVER!