All Comments on 'The Promotion: A Night to Remember'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
and He was Buried Two days later

First death recorded from too much sex.

Please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
good job

i love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
good so far

I thinks its a great story! I think bringing sonia into it would lessen it. Id keep the characters you have and play around with them more bwcause there is a lot more that could happen.

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