The Proposal Ch. 02

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She crawls into his waiting arms and kisses him lightly on the lips. "That was a good one," she teases. "We're going to have to do that again."

"Woman!" he says in mock sternness. "You are insatiable. Give an old man a break." Despite his words, his lingering kiss offers much promise for later. He kicks and drags with the foot she isn't lying on until he works the sheet to within reach. Pulling the sheet up, he smooths it, covering them to preventing her from getting cold.

"Mmmm," she murmurs, snuggling in even closer and placing her head on his chest so she can listen to the heavy, but slowing, thudding of his heart. She lies there, still and quiet, basking in the afterglow of their lovemaking until she drifts off to sleep.

His eyes closed, he listens to her breathing slowing and deepening as she falls into slumber, himself becoming drowsy as he relaxes. Giselle's peaceful breathing lulls him, and in that moment between sleeping and waking, when the world seems so clear, he wonders why he cares if Todd experiences them making love on the beach. Todd's experience would only be a simulation of the real thing, the woman he shares his bed with every night. Let him have Charlie, for hot as she is—and he allows himself to admit she is damn hot indeed—she is still a mere shadow of Giselle.

"I love you, Giselle," he says quietly before joining his wife, his soulmate, in the darkness of sleep.

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Marklynda2Marklynda212 months ago

The alternating paragraphs of each participant's mind bubble is very engaging, a little more intimate than the usual third party narration. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

VerbaliniansVerbaliniansalmost 4 years ago

I LOVE the concept of shared emotions and experiences. A little like the movie ‘inception’. However, the constant back and forth repeating of the love making from each ones experience was a bit repetitive, disconcerting and distracting. This is just my opinion and still a 4.90 in my view so I will give it a 5 for your benefit ! I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters in this story :)

DawnJDawnJalmost 11 years ago
Nicely done!

I love these four friends, but I have to say I'm very much a Rick fan! Maybe I'm even a lil bit in love with the guy! *smiles* I love this...but you know it already! Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Hot sex!

Wow! I think I'm in love! I like the way you make these sex scenes rock, man! Keep 'em coming!

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