All Comments on 'The Proposal Ch. 03'

Ya gotta love 'em! :). I still love my Rick, though, even if he's being a bit paranoid!

Just because you’re paranoid doesn’t mean they're not out to get you. ;)

Definitely would enjoy participating in this technology, to feel how it would be to have bigger equipment or make love to your dream girl. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.