All Comments on 'The Proposition'

Loved your story! Very realistic. Anal sex rarely ever goes smoothly the first time in real life. I feel you captured that well!

I found the changing of perspectives very confusing.....

I liked the changing perspectives, and the way you explained about him getting 'stuck', a very sweet and romantic story, thanks!

Well written, and once I got used to the constant shifting back & forth in the narration, I enjoyed the story.